Please stay spring weather
The wind whispers in my ear
Next year will come soon
So many problems
Time taps me on the shoulder
These issues will fade
REFLECTION:
Each one of these has a main idea with a problem and a solution. They both have cross-sensory metaphors that for some reason fascinate me. I think these were the best I could do, even though they aren't quite Captain Crunch. It like fills me up enough to where later on I know I could try again and do better.
HAIKUS
Please stay spring weather
The wind whispers in my ear
Next year will come soon
So many problems
Time taps me on the shoulder
These issues will fade
REFLECTION:
Each one of these has a main idea with a problem and a solution. They both have cross-sensory metaphors that for some reason fascinate me. I think these were the best I could do, even though they aren't quite Captain Crunch. It like fills me up enough to where later on I know I could try again and do better.